Post by Haunted Memories on Dec 16, 2007 12:22:20 GMT -5
Name:
Coldstar
Gender:
male
Age:
36 moons
Rank:
Leader
Clan:
Thunderclan
Picture:
Notable Kin:
Treepaw,Stormfeather,Browntail,Kiokit
Short Description:
Black tom with green eyes
In-Depth Description:
Coldstar is a black tom,with large green moons for eyes.His gentle steps make the earth below sleep,also his paws are small,white and gentle.His long tail fluffy tail is white with rings of black.
He has small,white ears that are always picked to find the smallest sign of mouse.He's mucles are built for hunting and fighting,but they are well hidden below his thick fur.He is rather small for his 36 moons.He has one ear tip missing and his font paws have five toes and his back paws have four toes.
Personality:
Coldstar was once a evil-hearted tom.He cared for nothing,and hated all.Soon when he was an apprentice he would force she-cats to mate with him or die.Coldstar was cold-hearted,he wanted kits.Coldstar would never hurt kits.He likes to hunt and fight.But before he was deputy he liked to kill and force breed.Now he's gentle and sweet.
History:
((Kitty-hood))
Coldkit was born to two great,yet not loyal warriors.Seastar and Featherstar.Featherstar was leader of Shadowclan and Seastar,Thunderclan.But soon after Coldkit and his brother Kiokit was born,Featherstar died.Kiokit,died two days later.Coldkit,was the last kit left,but somehow the medicine cat new about Seastar and Featherstar and gave Coldkit to Seastar.Coldkit never new about his mother,or his half-clan blood.So he grew up knowing that his father was leader and his mother died,at his brith.Coldkit was soon 5 moons when his warm glow from his eyes disappeared as his step-mother told him of his past.This made him drive into his evil ways.
((Apprentice--Hood))
Coldkit became Coldpaw.His mentor,a lovely she-cat named Huntfeather.She made Coldpaw feel warm inside,and he thought about letting his past go,when he saw he with his older friend Yerntooth.At night when everyone was asleep he asked Yerntooth to go hunting,Huntfeather accepted,and so did Yerntooth,he asked if Huntfeather wanted to come but she said no,thank you.Soon Coldpaw was about 30 fox-tails away,when he gave Yerntooth the kill.Than Yerntooth was dead.Huntfeather had left to make sure the to were ok,when she saw Coldpaw cring over Yerntooth,he said that a dog had attacked and killed Yerntooth,but Coldpaw had lived.Huntfeather said she would do anything to help Coldpaw,so Coldpaw did what he wanted,he wanted Huntefeather to have HIS kits.And It was true.Than Coldpaw got another mentor another lovely she-cat,Fallenwhisker.She kinda liked Coldpaw,and he asked if she loved him.She replyed no,and Coldpaw did his magic,HIS kit were going to be born again.Than The last warrior that toke his mentoring was his father,Seastar.He was about 10 moons than.Soon he was a warrior of 12 moons.
((Warrior-hood))
Coldpaw was soon know as Coldclaw.Still something made him go all crazy.He got an apprentice and he pounced around thinking of the ways to get her to bear his kits.But he failed.She killed herself.Soon Coldclaw turned into a weak warrior,moaning over Stolepaw's,his apprentice,death.The two female he had mated with before would stare at him,and bring his kits away,all but two.Brownpaw and Stormpaw,two she-cats would walk over and meowed,"Your my daddy right?"He would nod and they would sit beside him.Stormpaw soon died,and that left Coldclaw close to Brownpaw.Soon Coldclaw was Brownpaw's mentor for the last three moons,during that time,Seastar had jumped Coldclaw and told him that he would have to change or die below Seastar's claws.Coldclaw agreed and became good.His daughter Brownpaw became Browntail,and Coldclaw became deputy.
((being Deputy for a day))
For one day,Coldclaw was deputy hunting with his daughter and finding out that his best friend,who he liked wasd having his kits.He was 24 moons old.The next day would come to soon,Seastar had come down with Black cough.His death was long and painful.Coldclaw stond by his side when Seastar meowed,Coldstar will be a great name.And the light faid from the leader's eyes,as Coldclaw steped out and yelled,"I am Coldstar!"
RP Sample:
((From another site with two different cats))
Bearstar Leader of Windclan,Steped lightly as he headed for the small rock witch he standed on for every clan meeting.Today was no different,but somehow it was.Bearstar lept up till he was looking at the apprentice den,hoping Scornpaw would come to this clan meeting.He had told her before that if she missed another clan meeting she would be left to hunt and than to feed the whole clan.But today was different,she would be getting a mentor and Hazelclaw would be Deputy.Than he let out a yowl,"All Cats Gather Below The Small Rock For A Clan Meeting!"
Scornpaw licked her paw within the apprentice den.Than She heared her leader call for the clan.It was rather small,maybe 4-5 warriors,her an apprentice,the medicine cat and leader.She sighed and got to her feet.She felt a grin cross her face.She licked her paws and lightly hissed,"I will become a warrior soon,with a mentor."Than Scornpaw walked out of the aprentice den,her eyes glittering,with the thought of power as a warrior.She stoped infont of Bearstar and hissed,"Will I get my mentor now?"Her thoughts laid hidden behind her blue eyes."Yes Scornpaw.."Than she watched Bearstar yowl again.
By:Apples
